Monday, December 17, 2012

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Fiction Story

Greg,
      Worst week of my life. I met this girl camping, I swear she’s insane. We hook up twice and she’s instantly in love with me. She won’t leave me alone! I was with two other girls too, one even had the same name as her, but she was the only one that got so attached. Thank God she lives a few states away. Next time you’re coming camping with me, you can take all the clingy girls.
                                                     
                                                                              Mike

Brianna,
      I met the most amazing guy! He’s tall, tan, muscular, and completely adorable. He lives kind of far away, but I don’t care. He’s so sweet; I would do anything to make him happy. I really like him; I can see myself with him for a long time. We need to have a sleepover soon to catch up! See you soon, love and miss you!

                                                                              Stephanie

Mike,
      Hi baby! I miss you so much. When do I get to see you again? When’s the next time you’re going camping? I love camping with you, it’s so much fun. Maybe next time you can introduce me to your parents. We can make this work sweetie, the distance can’t separate us. I hope I can see you soon! Write me back! Love you!

                                                                              Stephanie
Mike,
      I guess you’re busy, but I miss you! If you can make time to write to me I would really appreciate it. I asked my parents when we can go camping again, and they said soon! I’m so excited I really want to see you. If you find another girlfriend I understand, we’re far away, but I really want to make this work. I can’t stop thinking about you, you’re always on my mind. I need you in my life, Mike. I really hope I get to see you soon. I love you!

                                                                              Stephanie

Greg,
      She seriously won’t leave me alone. This girl is crazy. If she writes me one more letter asking when we can see each other, I’m going to rip my hair out. She doesn’t understand that I don’t like her. At all. We were never even dating in the first place. I completely used her. She found out about the other girls and she forgave me! I don’t know what I’m going to do I’m freaking out.
                                                                             
                                                                              Mike

Stephanie,
      Please leave me alone. I don’t want anything to do with you. Camping was a one time thing. It will never happen again. You need to grow up and move on. We were never dating, and we will never get back together. Like ever. I would appreciate it if you would stop sending me letters. You just make yourself seem desperate. We are miles and miles away from each other. It would never work between us.

                                                                              Mike

Dear Diary,
      I don’t know if Stephanie will ever leave me alone. I told her we can’t be together; it just wouldn’t work out. She really got on my nerves I don’t understand why she was so extremely clingy. We were only at the campground for a week, and we only hooked up two nights. It’s not a big deal, it happens all the time. I don’t know, maybe she’s like weirdly religious and doesn’t date much. Either way, I’m just glad I told her to stop bothering me. I can’t handle all of her crazy moods.

                                                                              Mike